Monday, September 14, 2015

The dollhouse of the witch




From her small balcony, the witch watched the world go by. She was so disappointed as she could not find any strangers crossing her house for the past 2 weeks. 

She was craving to play her villainous action as she did in the previous times.

Once, a strange handsome young boy, who missed his way, was coming towards the witch's house when she was waiting for the one in her balcony. She was so happy and went down as a pretty girl. 

The boy flattered with her beauty. The girl held his hands so smoothly.  The boy, as a robot, followed her. 


She took him to the room upstairs where she had an old dollhouse. The real old witch came out of the pretty girl, The boy feared and wanted to run. yet, he had no options. 


She changed the boy as an entryway to her dollhouse and fixed to it as she did for other parts in her dollhouse.



Word Count: 149

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30 comments:

  1. What a quirky story - especially the part of changing the boy into an entry way. An interesting one.

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    1. Thanks Keith.. Glad you liked it.. :-)

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  3. Witches will be witches. Nice story amd a nice lesson for young boys.

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  4. Great story and nice job combining two prompts!

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    1. Thanks Priceless Joy.. Glad that you are supporting me for every week..

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  5. Witches do that.. don't they.. at least she had no intention of eating him (yet)

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  6. The well known phrase "beware of Greeks bearing gifts" comes to mind, or in this case, pretty girls. A very idiosyncratic and dark story!

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    1. Ha Ha.. True in "beware of Greeks bearing gifts"..

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  7. Tell you what, I wouldn't mind being a witch! Clever combo.
    Rosey Pinkerton's blog

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    1. Even myself.. :-) Guess everyone love to do magic.. :-)

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  8. Ah, the witch in the doll house. Now there's the makings of a creepy horror movie!

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  9. Very intelligently written post.

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  10. A lovely and well written story about a dollhouse! Thank you for participating in the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. Be well... ^..^

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    1. Thanks Barb.. Glad you liked my story.. :-)

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  11. Oh what a great story...this witch seems to have many avatars...doll house would not have the same meaning anymore now...

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  12. Creative use of the prompt, Hema. That witch is both nasty and clever. Well done. :) --- Suzanne

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