From her small balcony, the witch watched the world go by. She was so disappointed as she could not find any strangers crossing her house for the past 2 weeks.
She was craving to play her villainous action as she did in the previous times.
Once, a strange handsome young boy, who missed his way, was coming towards the witch's house when she was waiting for the one in her balcony. She was so happy and went down as a pretty girl.
The boy flattered with her beauty. The girl held his hands so smoothly. The boy, as a robot, followed her.
She took him to the room upstairs where she had an old dollhouse. The real old witch came out of the pretty girl, The boy feared and wanted to run. yet, he had no options.
She changed the boy as an entryway to her dollhouse and fixed to it as she did for other parts in her dollhouse.
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Nice one dollhouse story..
ReplyDeleteThanks Anand.. :-)
DeleteWhat a quirky story - especially the part of changing the boy into an entry way. An interesting one.
ReplyDeleteThank you Gemma.. :-)
DeleteTwo prompts cleverly linked. Very enjoyable.
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Thanks Keith.. Glad you liked it.. :-)
DeleteWitches will be witches. Nice story amd a nice lesson for young boys.
ReplyDeleteYeah.. Thanks Yarnspinnerr.. :-)
DeleteGreat story and nice job combining two prompts!
ReplyDeleteThanks Priceless Joy.. Glad that you are supporting me for every week..
DeleteWitches do that.. don't they.. at least she had no intention of eating him (yet)
ReplyDeletehmm.. yeah yeah..
Delete~woah spooky :D
ReplyDeleteThe well known phrase "beware of Greeks bearing gifts" comes to mind, or in this case, pretty girls. A very idiosyncratic and dark story!
ReplyDeleteHa Ha.. True in "beware of Greeks bearing gifts"..
DeleteTell you what, I wouldn't mind being a witch! Clever combo.
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Even myself.. :-) Guess everyone love to do magic.. :-)
DeleteWicked fun!
ReplyDeleteAh, the witch in the doll house. Now there's the makings of a creepy horror movie!
ReplyDeleteVery intelligently written post.
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ReplyDeleteTricky witch! Great story!!
ReplyDeleteA lovely and well written story about a dollhouse! Thank you for participating in the Mondays Finish the Story challenge. Be well... ^..^
ReplyDeleteThanks Barb.. Glad you liked my story.. :-)
Deletescary story, a nice read
ReplyDeleteMy take : A Small Home
Oh what a great story...this witch seems to have many avatars...doll house would not have the same meaning anymore now...
ReplyDeleteCreative use of the prompt, Hema. That witch is both nasty and clever. Well done. :) --- Suzanne
ReplyDeleteWonderful write :)
ReplyDeleteWell done.
ReplyDeleteScary! :O
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